Sunday 15 September 2013

Stretching sentences

Stretching sentences

Today we were working at stretching our sentences to add detail in a concise and effective way.  How do you think we went???

The wonkey key
What =
The wonkey key was found 
who =
The wonkey key was found by the young boy
where =
The wonkey key was found by the young boy jammed into the rusty door
when =
The wonkey key was found by the young boy jammed into the rusty door after the building was abandoned 

Rachel, Trent and Winston


Stretching ourselves as well as our sentences

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